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My family   
I want to tell you a few words about my family.
My family is not large.
There are two of us in my family: mother and me. Also we have a pet.
   
My mother’s name is Yulia, she is a sister is the mistress in clinical laboratories.She is a good-looking woman with blonde hair. She is 54 but she looks much younger. She is very good at cooking.
My mummy is so beautiful when she smiles. And the crow`s-feet make her face so pretty!
When mummy smiles, I want to take her in my arms and whisper: "My dear mummy I love you very much"... In such minutes of the happiness and mutual understanding she remembers the time when I was so small. She tells about the happy minutes of my birth. And there is nothing wonderful such minutes! My name is Alexander, I am a student in Barnaul basic medical College. I want to become a good doctor.I love my family!

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